Tuesday, November 13, 2012

Learn from Reading


Rachel Yiyi Ge
Kitty Nard
English 113 A
14 November 2012
Learn from Reading
There is a proverb: “One is never too old to learn”. Learning is a thing that people can never stop for the whole life. It makes people knowledgeable, brilliant and confident. Reading is one of the easiest methods to earn knowledge. Reading requires courage, self-discipline, creativity, and persistence to me. I was born in a literary family so reading became a habit for me since I was very young. Personally, reading helps me a lot in my life.
Reading enhanced my personality. I am the only child of my family so my parents spoiled me. I used to be selfish: never share food or toys with other kids, take things from my grandpa without saying thanks, being rude to my parents when I was not satisfied. Things changed when I got my first book from my mom on my 6- year-old birthday—“The Book of Virtues”, wrote by William J. Bennett. I have read thousand of books in my childhood, this is not my favorite one but this is the one that influence me the most. Everyone recognizes these traits as essentials of good character: Responsibility, Courage, Compassion, Honesty, Friendship, Persistence and Faith. This book has contained hundreds of stories to instructing and inspiring anthology that will help me understand and develop those characters. It also provides examples of good and bad, right and wrong so that I develop such traits in great works of literature and exemplary stories from history. It is my initiatory book, which I could get the sources of the ideals by which I wish to live my life. 
Reading letting me knows about myself and help me figured out what kind of life I want to create. After I entered high school, I felt like I could do everything like an adult but actually I was not mature enough to be responsible for myself. Then I started to feel confused about the definition of grow up. Meanwhile, I have read a poem named Growing Up, which wrote by Cheng Gu, a famous Chinese poet in the 70s. In the poem, he stated that the mark of growing up is neither entering high school nor writing an essay in foreign language. The most remarkable milestone of growing up knows your goal of your future. This really means a lot to me in my whole life. From his poem, I noticed that life is short and limited, no one can make his or her life longer, but can make his or her life wider by experience more different cultures. I set up a goal of study abroad when I was 16. I was not born in a rich family so it is not easy for my parents to support me to study abroad. But, if I finished my college in 3 years, I can get a job in my mom’s company easily. It seems that I can get a stabile job and live comfortably in the future. But this is NOT what I want. I did many researches about study abroad and start to improve my English. Firstly, I attended to a IELTS training school. I have to provide my IELTS score to apply for entering CSUN and it requires a limitation of 5.5 out of 9 for international students to be admitted without engaged the international English program (IEP). To achieve my goal, I wrote myself a diary as a reminder. Every time when I felt tired for catching on my dream, I read that diary again and again and then put myself back to study. I took my exam on 19th February 2012. It was just after the Chinese New Year. All my families were gathering together to celebrate the big festival at our hometown: Anqing. But I did not join them; I prefer to go back to Beijing to study alone at school. I woke up at 7 o’clock in the morning and stay at the library for the whole day until it closed at 9 o’clock in the night everyday. I did thousands of exercises and read a lot of related books to get fully prepared. After I took the exam, I feel released. I was fill of confidents because I worked very hard on preparing the exam. The result came out at 29th February 2012 and I was very happy:  I got 6 out of 9. I sent my transcript and all the files to the admission and record office of CSUN and received my offer.
Reading also helps me on learning English especially on my writing skills. English became the biggest challenge to me after I made the decision of studying abroad. As the matter in fact, writing is the most difficult part for all international students not only for me. I can write very well in my native language—because I have read thousands of books in Chinese and I can easily find arguments and evidences to support my opinion.  But it is really hard for me to write in English. In order to enhance my writing skill, I began to read English articles since I recognize my weakness in writing. I have to introduce about one of the hardest writing experiences during my college: it is the first English essay I had written when I was a freshman. It was an investment project and I have sent thousands of emails to gathering useful data and it took me almost 3 moths to finish the project. There are difficulties everywhere: I had to translate all my thoughts and knowledge into English and I had collected a lot of data but I didn’t know how to start my essay and how to gather all the data together. To carry out the project, I have read a lot of economic magazines and newspapers and I even invented a writing process for myself. I made myself a list to organize the contents of my project. It was a hard time. But I got the highest score in my class due to my continuously hard working.
That was my narrative of how reading changes my life and how it helped during my study life. Reading really has a lot of advantages—Reading can make me smart and wise: I have learnt so many things from reading. And reading helps me a lot when I wrote: I can easily find arguments and evidences to support my opinion. Nevertheless, I am keep on reading more article and gain knowledge to make myself more wisdom and become a spiritual warrior. 

Monday, November 5, 2012

Proposal


Rachel Yiyi Ge
Kitty Nard
English 113 A
05 November 2012
Proposal  
I propose to write about my interest in reading and difficulties in writing. Before talking about the difficulties in writing, I want to introduce the advantages of reading.
 I am a big fan of reading since I was very little and I was benefited from reading. Reading requires courage, self-discipline, creativity, and persistence to me. Reading can make me smart and wise: I have learnt so many things from reading. And reading helps me a lot when I wrote: I can easily find arguments and evidences to support my opinion. I have read thousands of books so I can write very well in my native language, which is Chinese, but it is really hard for me to write in English.
From there, I would like to talk about the hard parts in my writing process. I want to talk about one of the hardest writing experience during my college: it is the first English essay I had written when I was a freshman. It was an investment project. I had collected a lot of data but I didn’t know how to start it and how to gather all the data together. Besides, I had to translate all my thoughts and knowledge into English. So I had to make myself a list to organized the contents of my project. After that I began to write about my experience of write an essay in English and show the audiences how I went through those problems.

Tuesday, October 30, 2012

Conversation between Hellen Keller and Douglass.

Group Members: Yiyi Ge, Abdulrahman Almukhaizeem, Mashari Aljasser.


Douglass:“ My mistress was, as I have said, a kind and tender-hearted woman; and in the simplicity of her soul she commenced, when I first went to live with her, to treat me as she supposed one human being ought to treat another.

Keller’ teacher translating: I am filled with wonder when I consider the immeasurable contrasts between the two lives, which it connects.

Keller’s teacher again: Have you ever been at sea in a dense fog, when it seemed as if a tangible white darkness shut you in, and the great ship, tense and anxious, groped her way toward the shore with plummet and sounding-line, and you waited with beating heart for something to happen? I was like that ship before my education began.

Douglass: When I went there, she was a pious, warm, and tender-hearted woman.

Keller’s teacher: Light! give me light!

Douglass:  If I was in a separate room any considerable length of time, I was sure to be suspected of having a book.

Keller’s teacher: she led me into her room and gave me a doll

Keller’s teacher: During the time I had played with it, Miss Sullivan slowly spelled into my hand the word "d-o-l-l.”

Douglass: It was some time before I found what the word meant. It was always used in such connections as to make it an interesting word to me.

Keller’s teacher: "w-a-t-e-r.”

Douglass: For larboard aft, it would be marked thus- “L.A.”

Keller’s teacher: Miss Sullivan had tried to impress it upon me that "m-u-g" is mug and that "w-a-t-e-r" is water

Douglass: I soon learned the names of these letters, and for what they were intended.

Keller’s teacher: I was flushed with childish pleasure and pride. Running downstairs to my mother I held up my hand and made the letters for doll.

Douglass: I don’t believe you; Let me see you try it.

Keller’s teacher: I left the well-house eager to learn.

Douglass: I would then make the letters, which I had been so fortunate as to learn, and ask him to beat that.

Keller’s teacher:  I learned a great many new words that day.

Douglass: In this way I got a good many lessons in writing which is quite possible I should never have gotten in any another way.

Keller’s teacher: Like Aaron's rod, with flowers.








Work cited

Hellen Keller, website, "The Story of My Life." American

Foundation For the Blind. October 30, 2012

Wednesday, October 24, 2012

My Literacy Portfolio


10/20/2012

Dear Classmates:

I am a big fan of reading since I was very little and I have learnt so many things from reading. My literacy portfolio contains the artifacts that remind me the benefits I gained from reading or writing. Those objects can bring back the memories and times that means a lot to me. Things that I brought into our class are a poem, a diary I have wrote when I was 18, two text massages from my friends, a picture of one of my favourite books, a picture of my favourite TV show, my first project in college and several photos.
The first thing I am going to talk about is a book wrote by William J. Bennett, The Book of Virtues. I have read thousand of books in my childhood, this is not my favourite one but this is the one that influence me the most. My mom gave it to me for my 6-year-old birthday. Everyone recognizes these traits as essentials of good character: Responsibility, Courage, Compassion, Honesty, Friendship, Persistence and Faith. This book has contained hundreds of stories to instructing and inspiring anthology that will help me understand and develop those characters. It also provides examples of good and bad, right and wrong so that I develop such traits in great works of literature and exemplary stories from history. It is my initiatory book, which I could get the sources of the ideals by which I wish to live my life.
After I entered high school, I felt like I could do everything like an adult but actually I was not mature enough to be responsible for myself. Then I started to feel confused about the definition of grow up. Now I am going to introduce a poem named Growing Up, which wrote by Cheng Gu, a famous Chinese poet in the 70s. In the poem, he stated that the mark of growing up is neither entering high school nor writing an essay in foreign language. The most remarkable milestone of growing up knows your goal of your future. This really means a lot to me in my whole life.
Our life is short and limited, we cannot make our life longer, but we can make our life wider by experience more different cultures. I set up a goal of study abroad when I was 16. I was born in a well-off family in China so it is not easy for my parents to support me to study abroad. Besides, if I finished my college in 3 years, I can get a job in my mom’s company easily. It seems that I can get a stabile job and live comfortably in the future. But this is NOT what I want. I did many researches about study abroad. My first target country was Australia and then I changed my mind to America. To achieve my goal, I wrote myself a diary as a reminder. Every time when I felt tired for catching on my dream, I read that diary again and again and then put myself back to study.
During college, I got the highest score on my first project. It was a hard time. I have sent thousands of emails to gathering useful data and it took me almost 3 moths to finish that. There are difficulties everywhere. I am so nervous when I facing them. My friends send me massages to support me. One of them said: I will always be by your side. The other said: you should thank to those difficulties in your life because those difficulties make you successful. You become stronger and knowledgeable after you solve the problem. No matter how hopeless I was, I could feel their support by reading these two messages. I am so thankful to my friends.
The last two artifacts are the TV show and a Chinese magazine. The American TV show: Friends is my favourite and teaches me a lot. I am the only child in my family and I was a spoiled girl like Rachel Green—I always do my shopping with my dad’s credit card and crying when I met difficulties. I wish I could find my dream career and become an independent girl like Rachel in the scene after study at CSUN. That’s why I named myself Rachel.
Oversea students are easily felt sad and lonely when the holiday comes. Last weekend, I found a Chinese bookstore at China town that sells Chinese magazines. I have ordered that magazine for more than 12 years so I was really exciting to see that in LA. It could help me get over of my tough time during study at CSUN.

Thus, these are the things that I put in my folder, and they really changed my life.

Yours, Sincerely,




Rachel Yiyi Ge 

Wednesday, October 10, 2012

Official iPhone 5 Trailer


Rachel Yiyi Ge
Kitty Nard
English 113 A
09 October 2012
The Use of Rhetorical Strategies in iPhone 5 Trailer
Apple is one of the greatest companies in the world because hey are so brilliant at marketing. And the heart of marketing is communication, which is based on rhetorical strategies: logos, pathos and ethos. Logos means logic, facts, reasons and rationalities—the author must be thoughtful and provide good reasons and supportive evidences to persuade the audience that his or her ideas are valid, or more valid then someone else; Pathos is emotion, sense, memory and common experience—communicator need to make people feel the same way as himself or herself and more likely to say ”me, too!”; Ethos is credibility, quote, authority and judgment from professionals—the speaker should be considerate, trustworthily, knowledge or fair. In the official trailer of iPhone 5, all of these three elements are used in combination cunningly.
Rhetoric is an art, which people use to process the message we send and receive. The main purpose of the official trailer of iPhone 5 is to convince people to buy them. To persuade the customers to buy the new iPhone, the speakers—apple’s salesmen must know the need of their clients. In the beginning of the advertisement, Jony Ive, the Senior Vice President from the design department, give a speech to make people think about their relationship with their iPhones. “When you think about your iPhone, it’s probably the object that you use the most in your life. It’s the product that you have with you all the time. With its unique relationship people have with their individual iPhone, we take changing it really seriously.” He states that people spend a lot of time with their iPhones. People text to each other, post status updates on our Facebook or Twitter accounts, check Emails, read books or news and paly games on iPhones. To most iPhone users, who may pay more attention on the new iPhone, he was just describing their daily life. It seems that Ive was talking about the facts that could be considered as Logos, or he was using Ethos because he is an expert in designing iPhone. However, this is neither Logos nor Ethos, he was using Pathos, which could bring audience thought about themselves and feel in the same way.
Ive then start talk about the changes they made on the new iPhone, ”It has been completely re-designed. For the first assignment ever, we have increase the size if the display. By making the screen taller than not wider, you can see more of your content for still comfortably use it with one hand. And yet even with the larger display, iPhone 5 is the thinnest lightest iPhone we have ever made. ” For some people, they take their iPhone with them all the time, so they absolutely want it shaped more comfortable for them to hold by one hand—that is definitely what Ive is going to talk about. He knows exactly what the audiences want! And the video begun to show the audience the new features of the iPhone 5: larger screen, thinner and lighter body, new shape that is easier to hold in one hand, etc. Even though it’s not very specific but it could still be recognized as logos.
 Bob Mansfield, the Senior Vice President of Apple Company, gave the second speech. He focuses more on the specific details of the new iPhone. As a professor, he explained the new features of the iPhone 5. He was trying to show the audience his knowledge of the new iPhone 5 by giving detail fact and features. “18% thinner”, 20% lighter”, “LTE—faster speed of downloading”, “LTE& CDMA chip plus A6 chip—two times faster then the old iPhone”, “new cover glass”, etc. These technical facts support Mansfield’s opinion: the iPhone 5 is “the best product we have ever made.” and he even called the new iPhone an “invention”—that could be defined as pathos. In this part of the official trailer of iPhone 5, Bob Mansfield was using logos the most, and, because he is an expert, there was a little bit ethos.
The iPhone users are not only interested in hardware, but also focus on the software, too. Therefore, the video started to introduce their changes on software. Scott Forstall, the Senior Vice President from iPhone software department, was giving a speech about the awesome software that the new iPhone 5 has with it. He mentioned their new 3D map in the new iPhone. “You can look at things like fly-over” he was using his own feeling of using the 3D map so this is considered as pathos. He also introduced some other highlighted features: turn by turn spoken direction could bring you to your destination easily; the panorama feature could help you get panoramic photos by only use your iPhone; Siri could do more—find place to eat and even make a reservation; built-in Facebook and facetime over cellular data networking, etc. All the information above is supportive evidence to show that iPhone 5’s software is so brilliant and amazing. These are exactly logos. Besides, as Scott Forstall is the Senior Vice President, there was ethos using in his speech.
At the end of the video, Jony Ive showed again. This time he was using logos the most to let the audience know how great the new iPhone 5 looks. The video shows the procedures of making an iPhone 5. They use diamond-cutting technique to processing the surface and brand new material on their product. These are absolutely logos.
The main point of an advertisement is not only to offer information about the product but also to persuade the audience to buy the product. To achieve this target, the salesman must know their audience’s need. By using rhetorical strategies can help them reach their goal easier. In the official trailer of iPhone 5, the speakers are very smart. All of them are experts in their career. They were showing the new features of their production and talking about their own experiences or ideas on using the new iPhone 5. It seems like they were just talking about the facts of life with an iPhone, but it was not. They use three rhetorical strategies—ethos, pathos and logos as a combination.
In fact, rhetorical strategies are widely used in people’s daily life. Rhetoric is not only in advertisement and conversations, but also in body language and films. Most time people just use rhetorical strategies unconsciously, but knowing that rhetoric can help them reach their goal easier. Rhetoric is an art of communication; it can help people deliver their thoughts and ideas to their audience easily. Rhetoric is being used on you all the time. It can be used in any situation, whether you are watching a film or an advertisement. So that is why it is really important to know how rhetorical strategies work on us.